The Great Bear Spirit Returns

It's been a long summer (still not over!) but ch. 23 of "A Friend in Darkness" is finally posted!

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Illustrated web page: [link]

In this chapter, Monkey Fist and Maze unleash the Ubergolem against Kim's home town! How can she stop something that's indestructible? Read to find out, and review at fanfiction.net to post your thoughts....

Both Kim and Grimm are powerless to stop the Ubergolem, but the turmoil of knowing this could be his last chance to save Rhonda, Grimm manages to make contact with and summon the Great Bear Spirit!

Sure I was inspired by the summoning jutsu of Naruto fame, but read for yourself and decide if it's a rip off or not.....